1. Overall I'm very happy with how my paper turned out. I'm sure their could have been a little more editing done to it, but I'm satisfied with it. I did a lot of editing, taking bits and pieces out that weren't necessary, and placing events in order.
2. Reading my peers' papers, I learned that my paper really wasn't in order and it was actually quite scrambled. For my final draft I placed all my events in the right order and made it less confusing.
3. At this point I think I need a little more guidance since I wasn't completely sure on how my paper was gonna start or turn out to be. Although we did have a lot of examples, I was still slightly confused on where to begin.
4. I wrote about how music changed my life and how it helped me become a better person. It's a very personal and self-changing experience for me.
5. I wanted the reader to understand how my experience changed me. I also wanted them to look at the big picture to see how it developed my character and made me into a stronger person. The lesson was to not be afraid to work hard for what you wan because in the end your hard work will pay off.
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